I know the feeling well. One critique - Nothing about this view really gets me into this space. You've given us the view of the back of your head. We usually try to avoid staring at the backs of people's heads. haha Get us into this space... show us your expression. Don't rely on the message on the screen. Show the viewer some emotion, show us a dynamic composition. PUT us in that space.
I know the feeling well. One critique - Nothing about this view really gets me into this space. You've given us the view of the back of your head. We usually try to avoid staring at the backs of people's heads. haha Get us into this space... show us your expression. Don't rely on the message on the screen. Show the viewer some emotion, show us a dynamic composition. PUT us in that space.
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